Friday, April 13, 2012

Soot's Story Ch1

   "What are you doing?"growled Scourge.
"Being strong warriors,like you Scourge!" Claw beamed.Scourge stared at them, then at Soot.
"Stop." Scourge said blankly, "Come Soot." he looked at Soot and walked towards his place in the alley. Soot stared in disbelief  and Claw and Ice growled at her. Obliviously mad because Scourge choose to talk to her,and not them.Soot bounded over to Scourge. "Sit." he told Soot,"I have a story for you, I'm a lot like you..." Soot tilted her head. Scourge chuckled, and Soot was definitely puzzled, Scourge was hardly ever happy.And he was only happy when he won in battles,and sometimes not even then! She listened quietly to the black tom.
   "Okay,promise not to tell anyone, Soot?" Scourge sounded like a kit. Soot nodded.
   "Never, I wont ever tell, no one." she promised.
 "Okay. Here goes... When I was younger, about your age, I had a brother and a sister, Socks and Ruby. They tormented me,like Ice and Claw do to you. One day some Two-leg kits came, they 'adopted' Socks and Ruby. Ruby told me they threw unwanted kits in the river. So I ran away, I ran into some forest cats, Tigerpaw was the one who about killed me." he paused and licked his paw.
   "Really? I'm almost exactly like you!" exclaimed Soot. Scourge nodded.
"I know we don't normally have apprentices...but I am going to be your mentor. And you will be as strong as me! And we shall rule!" He yowled. Soot stared in awe. Scourge put a purple collar around her neck, like his only it had no teeth. "Go. Go to Claw and Ice and tell them that I am your mentor! Make the jealous!" He sneered.
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 "Scourge is my mentor!" Soot said proudly. Claw hissed.
"I'll believe that when hedge hogs fly!" growled Ice. Soot unsheathed her claws and growled.
"Fine ask Scourge yourself." she mumbled.
"Fine. I will." Ice lashed her tail and her and Claw stalked of toward Scourge's den.
"Mouse brained." Soot rolled her eyes. It was getting late so she went to her nest. Tons of thoughts raced through her mind...Tomorrow is when I have to kill a family member...Which one..? My cousin, Fluff, the weakling? Ice and Claw? Mamma, Papa? Who? she finally drifted of to sleep deciding she would kill Papa, he was strongest, she'd look strong if she killed him, plus Papa killed her sister, Violet;the only one who was nice to her.

Saturday, April 7, 2012

Soot's Begining

   Soot, the sooty gray and black she-cat... Born  into BloodClan, Scourge their leader, her role model. Scourge seemed to like her best from his clan,besides from Bone,his deputy.

   "Get..off!" squeaked Soot. Her brother, Claw,a brown tabby, with sharp claws,had pinned her to the hard alley ground.
   "Claw,don't get off!" yowled Ice, Soot's sister, a frosty looking white she cat with ice blue eyes.
  "Don't worry! I wont!" hissed Claw.
  "Claw! Ice! Get over here! Now!" screeched a adult black she-cat, Soot,Claw,and Ice's mother.
  "Coming mother!" cried Claw and Ice,running toward a box in the alley. Soot quietly stalked them and hid behind a garbage can,to list to what her Mother said.
  "You can behave like that! Soot is much tinier than you, I suggest you enjoy the time you have with each other for now!" whispered Night sternly.
   I know what she is talking about, we gotta kill a family member,to get one of those collars Scourge has, Ice and Claw want one pretty bad, tomorrow is the day we do that thought Soot crossly.
   It was a few hours after Night had talked to Ice and Claw, yet they continued to torment her, Ice was tackling her and Claw was batting at her tail with unsheathed claws. A black tom came stalking up to them.
Claw and Ice stared up at him in awe,while Soot shrank away and press her ears to her head.
"What are you doing?" growled Scourge.